Friday, October 31, 2008

The spirit of marine still lives
by:Dinelsy Almonte



About two long years have past .The body of Marine laid inside a coffin in a attic inside of a creppy old building were people haven't leave in for about 30 years.Marine use to be a grateful 23 years old woman ,with many friends.she had every she wanted a husband,friends,and a great place to live in,but then a big obstacle came to her husband(Omar) until he started having relations with another woman(Ann) and had 2 kids.Marine couldn't support that anymore so she left him.Omar wanted her and and wanted the other woman so instead he killed Marine so no one else could have her.After he kill her he hid her in a coffin.Because of what Omar did to Marine this became a curse.She wanted revenge and haunted many people.She mostly haunted the daughter of Ann (Amber)who was innocent.She always keep showing up to her.Amber was so freaked out and started looking for help from people that knew Marine.The woman who appear for help was named Julina .She gave Amber all the information about Marine.Then 1 day past and Amber knew that she would have to go to the building were Marine was hiden then go the the sementary and burry her there so her core could be in the world of the death.In that cod snowy night Amber had to get Marine body in the attic then go to the sementary and burry her there.Also the misterious part was that when Amber went to get Marine body in the attic someone was following her but she looked to her sides and no one was there.Then when Amber went to the sementary suddendly her father appear there to help her burry Marine.Then after many things that have happen Amber though her father was a suspisious one.Amber softly replied "dad do you have anything to do with Maine death"then from a moment to another he got mad and hit her with the shuvle.MAber was panic and ran for the end of her life.Then Julina showed up and hit Omar in the head.

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