The spirit of marine still lives
by:Dinelsy Almonte



About two long years have past .The body of Marine laid inside a coffin in a attic inside of a creppy old building were people haven't leave in for about 30 years.Marine use to be a grateful 23 years old woman ,with many friends.she had every she wanted a husband,friends,and a great place to live in,but then a big obstacle came to her husband(Omar) until he started having relations with another woman(Ann) and had 2 kids.Marine couldn't support that anymore so she left him.Omar wanted her and and wanted the other woman so instead he killed Marine so no one else could have her.After he kill her he hid her in a coffin.Because of what Omar did to Marine this became a curse.She wanted revenge and haunted many people.She mostly haunted the daughter of Ann (Amber)who was innocent.She always keep showing up to her.Amber was so freaked out and started looking for help from people that knew Marine.The woman who appear for help was named Julina .She gave Amber all the information about Marine.Then 1 day past and Amber knew that she would have to go to the building were Marine was hiden then go the the sementary and burry her there so her core could be in the world of the death.In that cod snowy night Amber had to get Marine body in the attic then go to the sementary and burry her there.Also the misterious part was that when Amber went to get Marine body in the attic someone was following her but she looked to her sides and no one was there.Then when Amber went to the sementary suddendly her father appear there to help her burry Marine.Then after many things that have happen Amber though her father was a suspisious one.Amber softly replied "dad do you have anything to do with Maine death"then from a moment to another he got mad and hit her with the shuvle.MAber was panic and ran for the end of her life.Then Julina showed up and hit Omar in the head.

Raft:This Land is Your Land

How does the information in he box " a day in the life(of me!)" help the reader understand the article?


The information in the box of "a day in the life (of me! )'' gives the reader details about the daily tasks of living off the land. This information helps people understand more the schedule of the woman life.

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Revenge of the wannabes
by: Lisi Harrison
# of pages read:40-80

Now Alicia is starting a new life.she have been in a pogram of T.P(teen people) and there they have offer her many opportunities to be famous with her friend Oliva. Alicia is taking that change and moving her problem to the other side ,how ever she think that Massie is a normal person that will no interfer in her dreams.This is were she made her mistake because Massie and her friends are watching every step that alicia and olivia give. Massie want Alicia to suffer.since Massie always use to be popular and get to control everyone, she is getting jealous of seen her x-best friend achieving her goals.
My opininon for this book right now is that the is many jealously going around and things are going to turn out wrong.

Readers response 1

Dinelsy Almonte Octuber 07,2008
339/802 ms.johns


revenge of the wannables

Well Massie have found out that Alicia have being making her own sleepover. The next day they had a fight ,after that Alicia choose to go on her own path and be herself not Worring so much of Massie(like how she use to sometimes envy her)Alicia is now with her best friend Olivia and they are about to get famous.Alica and Olivia really in to her program of teen-people but the problem is that many people are jealous of her and they want her to suffer.I could infer that Massie is going to be the antagonist really soon because she is starting to be nasty to Alicia and they use to be bf.now i could say that Alicia self-steem is going higher because she is doing what she believe in and not just what people want her to do.i could predict that in the future alicia x-best friends are going to be her obstacles because they are starting to make Alicia and people nae her bad.They go to Alicia parties goes to make fun other and her fans. getting in Alicia shoes I would just do what she is doing ingoring them and doing what I believe.